{"id":9887,"date":"2018-11-11T03:41:11","date_gmt":"2018-11-11T02:41:11","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.themanchesterreview.co.uk\/?p=9887"},"modified":"2018-11-11T03:41:53","modified_gmt":"2018-11-11T02:41:53","slug":"ellen-hinsey-the-illegal-age-reviewed-by-ian-pople","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.themanchesterreview.co.uk\/?p=9887","title":{"rendered":"<strong>Ellen Hinsey | <em>The Illegal Age<\/em> | reviewed by Ian Pople<\/strong>"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><strong>Ellen Hinsey | <em>The Illegal Age<\/em> | Arc Publications: \u00a310.99<\/strong><\/p>\n<p><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"http:\/\/i67.tinypic.com\/30mbka8.jpg\" width=\"220\" align=\"left\" style=\"margin-right: 10px\"><\/p>\n<p>Ellen Hinsey\u2019s <em>The Illegal Age<\/em> is a study in rhetoric.  It is a study in how language is warped by power and how language colludes with and supports power.  As such it is, perhaps, a poetic rendering of some of the analyses of Foucault or the recently deceased linguist, Michael Halliday.  That warping of language is built into the structuring of the book both in the overall set up of the book and also in the layout of the \u2018poem\u2019s on the page.  <\/p>\n<p>The book is divided into three parts, each labelled as follows:  Part One Investigation File Smoke; Part Two Investigation File Ice; Part Three Investigation File Obscurity. Within each part there are seven sub-sections, each usually named differently, apart from the middle, fourth section which is always prefixed \u2018Internal Report\u2019.  The subsections, themselves, have such names as \u2018The Illegal Age\u2019, this latter occurs twice, \u2018The Laws\u2019, \u2018Carved into Bark\u2019 or \u2018The Denunciation\u2019.  This sectioning all suggests a rather schematic book and that is both true and is, possibly, part of Hinsey\u2019s point, that we live in a world which is all too schematic and which schematises both humans and the power which is wielded over them.  Such schematising suggests an organisation which can be so baroque and labyrinthine that it catches out all of us and not only the unwary. <\/p>\n<p>The pages of the book also have a particularised layout.  There is usually a centred, italicised number and title at the top;  let\u2019s take page 35, which as [6.] then Bellum Contra Populum at the top, and the first section of the six on the page has the centred, italicised title Inevitability.  This labelling is then followed by the following, \u2018In time the Inconceivable tires of the thicket of its own rhetoric, eventually revealing its true motives like a stiff wind exposes a cliff face.\u2019 The next section is entitled \u2018Bureaucratic Cannabalism\u2019, \u2018The Inconceivable knows it is only a matter of time before its own Tribe members will be submitted to the Purges of Perfection.\u2019  Thus Hinsey mixes the formal, bureaucratic language with the lyrical.  This is a mixture that allows the lyrical to subvert the formal.  As such, there is a temptation to see this book as a kind of technical exercise, which, to some extent, it  remains no matter how successful it is.  <\/p>\n<p>The playing of the lyrical against the formal does allow the book to ventriloquise a number of the voices of the participants in this power struggle.  For example, there are those who become part of the state apparatus, as in this from the start of part three of the book, \u2018If there were orders, we were never informed, rather \u2013 We\u2019ll learn of their swift fulfilment only when \/\/ After the low raids of night \u2013 a light remains along \/ The distance\u2019s far expanse: if there were orders \u2013\u2018. Here, Hinsey\u2019s adroit use of the conditional \u2018If there were orders\u2019 played against the future \u2018We\u2019ll learn\u2019, emphasises the space for denial, created in \u2018we were never informed\u2019.  This denial then merges with the lyricism in line three.  This mixture of register and style actually allows the reader to have some empathy with those who deny, as rebarbative as that is. Such empathies force the reader into asking themselves difficult questions, too. <\/p>\n<p>Hinsey sometimes anchors the structures and address of the language with places and times. A sub-section might carry, for example, Warsaw 1944, or Kolyma 1952.  Section XIII, sub-titled \u2018File 53291 The Denunciation\u2019 carries the location, East Germany 1979.  This locating, too, is deftly done;  there are never too many of these, so that the text is both grounded in certain particulars, but never tied to too many of them.  Had all sections had a place and time, it might have resulted in too much specificity, and undermined the way in which Hinsey extends the sense of the authoritarian to the whole of contemporary Europe.  <\/p>\n<p>I\u2019m writing this review as the world awaits the results of the American mid-term elections.  A \u2018populist\u2019 right-wing president has just been elected in Brazil.  Hungary and Poland both have right wing governments and Marine Le Pen has inflicted defeats on Macron in France.  The AfD is making strides in Germany.  <em>The Illegal Age<\/em> has epigraphs from Hannah Arendt and Osip Mandelstam.  Hinsey herself has translated and edited poems by Tomas Venclova, the Lituanian dissident and poet.  This collection is a timely and powerful book.  <\/p>\n<p><strong> by Ian Pople<\/strong><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Ellen Hinsey | The Illegal Age | Arc Publications: \u00a310.99 Ellen Hinsey\u2019s The Illegal Age is a study in rhetoric. It is a study in how language is warped by power and how language colludes with and supports power. 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