{"id":9099,"date":"2018-01-25T17:59:45","date_gmt":"2018-01-25T16:59:45","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.themanchesterreview.co.uk\/?p=9099"},"modified":"2018-01-30T19:39:03","modified_gmt":"2018-01-30T18:39:03","slug":"andrew-mcculloch-gradual-ian-pople","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.themanchesterreview.co.uk\/?p=9099","title":{"rendered":"Andrew McCulloch, Gradual<\/em>, reviewed by Ian Pople"},"content":{"rendered":"

Andrew McCulloch, Gradual<\/em>, (Melos Press) \u00a35.00<\/strong><\/p>\n

The centre piece, literally, of Andrew McCulloch\u2019s new pamphlet, Gradual<\/em>, is a translation of six \u2018Holy Sonnets\u2019 attributed to the French playwright, Jean Racine. In a lengthy note at the back of the pamphlet, McCulloch acknowledges the disputed attribution of the poems. The poems also have a somewhat obscure provenance, having been discovered \u2018in the Imperial Library of Saint Petersburg\u2019 by one, Abbe Joseph Bonnet. Liturgically, the \u2018Gradual\u2019 itself, is the name sometimes given to the psalm with responses which is chanted, or these days often spoken, between the two readings from the Bible read during the Eucharist. Thus McCulloch\u2019s title announces itself as a response. And there is considerable deftness in that title. McCulloch\u2019s translations clearly \u2018respond\u2019 to the original French; and the \u2018Racines\u2019 are not the only translation here. McCulloch also translates a sonnet by the twentieth century French poet, Guillevic. <\/p>\n

McCulloch comments that \u2018Each of the 128 sonnets in the collection is a paraphrase of a verse from one of the Psalms.\u2019 That might imply that the poems are quite intimately connected to those Bronze Age originals. Well, up to a point perhaps. We might see this in the sonnet whose opening two lines, McCulloch translates as \u2018You know the places where I try to hide – \/ The corners where I cower from your sight \u2013 \u2018 We might speculate that this sonnet could be related to Psalm 139, sometimes known as The Hound of Heaven, whose opening line in the Book of Common Prayer is rendered as, \u2018O Lord, thou has searched me out, and known me : thou knowest my down-sitting and mine up-rising; though understandest my thoughts long before.\u2019, and later, in this version from the Benedictine Handbook, \u2018O where can I go from your spirit, \/ or where can I flee from your face.\u2019 McCulloch, in his commentary on his own translations of the \u2018Holy Sonnets\u2019, notes that, \u2018a translator familiar with the language of the Bible and the Book of Common Prayer may find the job half done already.\u2019 Such a modest disclaimer is slightly disingenuous. McCulloch\u2019s idiom is both contemporary and responsive to the directly religious address that the sonnets point towards. <\/p>\n

Donne\u2019s \u2018Holy Sonnets\u2019 are \u2018violent and perverse\u2019 according to Yvor Winters. But McCulloch\u2019s renderings of \u2018Racine\u2019s\u2019 Holy Sonnets are the antithesis to that. Where Donne\u2019s sonnets rage, often in a kind of sado-masochism, and not just in \u2018Batter my heart, three-personed God\u2019; the sonnets presented here are logical, often quite calm and collected and also pious. If the narrator has doubts, they are not the kind which requires the violent interventions of Donne\u2019s God. The doubts in these pieces are doubts where God is truly God the Father; they are doubts about worthiness and obedience. \u2018You know the places where I try to hide\u2019 ends with, \u2018Let me not go where I have fixed my eyes \/ But turn me round and let me face the skies.\u2019 The monosyllables of that last line have a quiet cadence which is not only a quiet acquiescence to the will of God, but are also a testament to McCulloch\u2019s quiet, fastidious elegance. Thus these Holy Sonnets might almost be placed in the Welsh tradition of praise poems. <\/p>\n

The other sense of response about this collection is contained in McCulloch\u2019s \u2018own\u2019 poems, which are imbued with a range of empathies. This can be an obvious empathy for a baby; as in the pamphlet\u2019s final poem \u2018For Helena\u2019, with its concern for the child finding its own way in the world, and which ends, \u2018those eyes clenched tight, \/ like tiny fists, \/ against the light \/ from which you came.\u2019 Or it can be an empathy for the inanimate, as in the lovely \u2018Fly Past\u2019. This is another unrhymed sonnet in which the observer responds to a plane as it descends to a standstill after flying over \u2018the car we drive in to her funeral,\u2019 This plane growls \u2018with the real sound of death\u2019 and offers a kind of complicating vision of the death that the funeral cortege is marking, \u2018The rows of rivets, the serious smell of fuel, \/ the bounce and turn of tyres as it lands \/ touch us for a second with the truth,\u2019 That close observation pervades this short, but compelling collection and shows McCulloch to be a poet of wide and adroit empathies, and considerable, understated power. <\/p>\n

Ian Pople<\/strong> <\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

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