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The Belgian author Maurice Car\u00eame (1899 – 1978) is apparently much loved and seen as a major figure in his homeland. I read this volume with growing respect and a growing sense that for all their absence of obvious difficulty these were poems that would reward extensive rereading. Car\u00eame\u2019s predilection for short (sometimes very short) lines, the brevity and tight focus of the poems and their generally simple syntax and vocabulary give them a modest air, but they are the fruits of much meditation, accumulated wisdom and technical skill, and they cover a wide range of feelings and attitudes. There are fine dark poems and fine poems of delight in life or of a good humoured acceptance that creates delight, like the charming \u201cM\u00e9lanie\u201d. Some are constructed as superficially straightforward snapshots or anecdotes, others use ballad techniques, like the brilliant \u201cLe canot\u201d, and others have a tinge of surrealism.<\/span><\/p>\n

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Richly varied when taken together, individually these pieces are composed with a tact and skill that makes them grow unobtrusively in the mind. \u201cL\u2019animal\u201d, for example, might be read as merely a poem of evocative empathy with a pet abandoned in a wood, but by stripping the scene to essentials and using universalising terms Car\u00eame gives it a frisson of threatening enigma and turns it into a brief, stark parable of metaphysical abandonment. And he handles rhyme and syntax with a dexterity that can become a powerful vehicle of meaning. Take \u201cL\u2019homme et la mort\u201d. It is about how completely death is wound into a man\u2019s life:<\/span><\/p>\n

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<\/span>La mort parlait avec sa voix,<\/span><\/p>\n

<\/span>S\u2019 \u00e9battait dans son corps …<\/span><\/p>\n

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That internal rhyme of \u201cmort\u201d and \u201ccorps\u201d precisely reinforces the idea that our body is the body of our death. At the end, <\/span><\/p>\n

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<\/span>[La mort] lui faisait, \u00e1 l\u2019aurore,<\/span><\/p>\n

<\/span>Regretter de n\u2019\u00eatre pas mort.<\/span><\/p>\n

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The return of \u201cmort\u201d as the last word, rhyming with the first phrase, suggests the snapping shut of the trap that the whole poem has presented, but the simultaneous rhyme with \u201caurore\u201d offers not only grim irony but also perhaps a glimpse of hope. Typically, Car\u00eame leaves it to us how far we take this as a poem about one old man feeling the approach of death and how far as a parable of the relation between life and death in general. The many poems about death in the volume clearly reflect the author\u2019s sense of his own approaching end, but they are always depersonalised. A profound lack of egotism is one of Car\u00eame\u2019s most attractive features, and is no doubt one reason why he was a beloved children\u2019s author (although this is clearly not a children\u2019s book).<\/span><\/p>\n

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Translating rhyme always creates problems, especially when the lines are short. In a number of cases Pilling has wisely avoided it altogether, using less obtrusive patterning devices instead to produce translations that read almost as well as their originals. He clearly gave a great deal of thought to the practicalities of reproducing formal features on a case by case basis. In some of the translations, especially the lighter ones, copious rhyming works well in English. In some Pilling has stripped out almost all rhyme in order to use the little he does use with sharper effect. I felt that there were poems where the will to rhyme produced a dilution by verbal padding and others where rhyme was jingling or clunky, but overall this is a translation which serves the original very creditably and in the case of some individual poems much better.<\/span><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

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